Chapter 9...Done!

I have finished Chapter 9.  I have started sharing chapters with my mother-in-law.  She is an avid novel reader and has a masters in English.  I figure she is the perfect person to help me edit and give me some honest reviews.  So far, the feedback has been 95% positive and she cannot wait until it is finished.  She also said it would make a great movie!  That would be a dream, but first things first...finish the book.